Allina Nightengale

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AllinaFallenNightengale

Daughter of Aphrodite

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The Basics

Allina Fallen Nightengale

Age -
16

Gender -
Female

Birthdate -
September 6th 1995

Godly Parent -
Aphrodite

Abilities -
Can be beautiful at will and Create loving feelings and Charmspeak and change hair color. Allina only uses her abilities when its necessary. Allina's hair changes with her mood. Blonde for happy, Red for mad, Purple for neautral, Pink for love, and Blue for sadness. Allina only uses her charmspeak when she absolutely needs to.
Personaility -
Allina is a sweet and fun loving girl who has many friends. Although her friends consider her the nicest girl on earth, she can be very mean at times.

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Appearance

General Looks

Height:5' 4"
Weight:80 pounds
Hair Color:Blonde
Eye Color:Blue
Distinguishing Features:Alina is a blonde haired blue eyed girl. Allina is very skinny. People call her anorexic but shes not. Several guys in her highschool swooned over her.
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History

Family -
Dad: Mark nightengale

History -
Allina was born in hollywood california and raised by her father. She grew up with guys swooning over her. She always asked her father why they did and he would just change the subject. Allina was 11 when her father died and she lived on her own.
She had just turned 14 when she learned she was a demigod. Allina avoided her friends knowing that if they found out they would think she was a freak. She had just turned sixteen when she was on her way to the camp of half blood hill.

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Heart

Guest

Looking good, but don't forget to add the paragraphs! Not approved until they are added, since they are very important.

Guest

There i edited

Subject: Re: Allina Nightengale Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:15 pm

The *'s need to be deleted and filled out.

Guest

Fixed it again

Subject: Re: Allina Nightengale Mon Apr 11, 2011 4:30 am

Do you see how you did the history? Can you make it all like that?

Instead of:

Abilities-These are my abilities.

Abilities
These are my abilities.

Guest

Ok i finally fixed it!!!!

Subject: Re: Allina Nightengale Fri Apr 15, 2011 3:18 pm

No, I don't suppose you did.

Guest

What the hexk did i do wrong this time?!?!?! My creations been here for about a week!!!!

Subject: Re: Allina Nightengale Sun Apr 17, 2011 5:38 pm

Kay, look at the last thing he told you to do, about instead of this:

Abilities- This is what I can do

You need to do this:

Abilities-
This is what I can do

Guest

Ok i did that >.<

Subject: Re: Allina Nightengale Mon Apr 18, 2011 1:29 pm

No, Heart, I'm sorry, but you did not.

Guest

Guest

Okay so say my color is yellow, here's what you did in the beginning:

Birthday-I don't know
*

Here's what you just did now:

Birthday-
I don't know

Here's what your supposed to do (remember, put where the star was in the beginning):

Birthday-
I don't know

Guest

You're not a mod ice, you're trying to help which is appreciated, but don't post here without permission. Now heart, listen. What you did with history. The heading is colored, and the rest isn't. They are saying fix that. Put a

Code:: [/color]

where the color needs to end. So instead of

Code:: [color=1] Abilities - ~~~~~~~~ paragraph[/color]

Make it more like,

Code:: [color=1]Abilities[/color]
~~~~~~~~~~ paragraph

Make sense now?

Guest

Like that?

Subject: Re: Allina Nightengale Wed Apr 20, 2011 1:54 pm

Just fix the appearance, and I'll approve.